This week’s Poetics prompt from dVerse Poets Pub is to choose a painting by Alma Thomas to inspire a poem. What struck me most about her pieces is how she evoked spaces and feelings with what looked to me like uneven bricks. I made an uneven bricks filter last fall, so inspired by Alma Thomas’s work, I made some images of my own.

The piece by Alma Thomas that inspired my poem is Light Blue Nursery (1968), acrylic on canvas, Smithsonian American Art Museum
When the Light Hits Just Right
uneven bricks
chipped and imperfect
changing color in the sun’s lace
missing mortar
creating crannies
shady inlets for the misplaced
strength in numbers
you hold together
and keep the barrier embraced
form with function
an aging beauty
broken lines to define our space
nature’s power
fought, but never won
leaves us all battered in her grace

A beautiful metaphor Maria
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Welcome Maria
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so much beauty within these lines, just like that beauty you mention in your poem and definitely a poem which has form and function too..
my attempt is here
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I like the idea of bricks. The brush strokes do look like that. “changing color in the sun’s lace” especially captivates me. Such a beautiful thought. And nature leaving us battered “in her grace”. I’m sure nature is very gracious in her dealings with us as we make a mess of things sometimes.
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Glad you liked it.
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I really like this poem. So much depth and wisdom between those bricks.
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Thank you. I’m glad.
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Wow! I love your take, Maria. Love this especially
“missing mortar
creating crannies
shady inlets for the misplaced”
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
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you gave the art an even paced meter that matches the brush strokes and a repeat rhyme of colour too
“shady inlets for the misplaced” – brilliant thought-filled line!
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Thank you.
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