Oct. 11 Prompts: Lurking in the Shadows

Why the Long Faces by Maria L. Berg 2021

Today lets look at light and shadow in the form of a Cleave poem. The neat thing about this two column poem is it can be read as three different poems. Here’s a cleave poem I wrote in December of 2021 using bold text instead of columns:

Crimson Morning Light

Even when certified, I must sleep
officially declared possessing, my eyes close
meeting certain standards, my breath slows
no law covers this nightly transport
the dream smuggler of kermes vermilion
a scale insect, a sap parasite
writhing with nymphs, squashed to crimson
the color of the light behind
my closed lids, the pulsing blood
singing the sun, rising to greet
sneaking through curtains, the day begun

Writober 2023

Today’s image prompt is a photograph by Gregory Crewdson. Look carefully at the shadows. Where is that spotlight coming from? Where is the light that’s making those tree-shadows?

The image at the top of this post is a photo I took playing with shadow art. I made a Pinterest board with some shadow art I think is amazing.

Please link to your creations in the comments. I can’t wait to see what you come up with.

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5 thoughts on “Oct. 11 Prompts: Lurking in the Shadows

  1. Laura De Bernardi

    the dictionary of light & dark

    what is light
    is luminscent
    radiant, glowing
    ablaze

    what is dark
    is black, inky
    murky, gloomy
    shady

    synonym count:
    more for light
    than for dark

    adjectives for dark:
    calamitous
    catastrophic
    cataclysmic
    ruinous

    a bomb explodes
    it is light
    then it’s dark

    thinking of Gaza
    thinking of Israel

    light life
    dark death

    what we wish
    upon each other

    light blazes
    it is also possible
    to say that
    dark blazes too

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