banausic: adjective – relating to or concerned with earning a living; utilitarian; mechanical; practical. Not operating on a refined or elevated level; mundane.
Today’s NaPoWriMo theme was the I, or the speaker of the poem. I thought it tied in well with witness testimony which I am studying in an online forensic psychology class through futurelearn.com
I also found inspiration in National Book Award Winner Lighthead: Poems (Penguin Poets) by Terrance Hayes, especially “Lighthead’s Guide To Addiction” and “Satchmo Returns To New Orleans.”
Craft Book Review
I first came across Jack M. Bickham‘s name while reading Crafting Dynamic Dialogue: The Complete Guide to Speaking, Conversing, Arguing, and Thinking in Fiction (Creative Writing Essentials)
from the editors of Writer’s Digest. His book Writing novels that sell
was mentioned in a section called Parent-Adult-Child which talked about three primary roles people/characters occupy in life.
My local library didn’t have that book, but did have Scene & Structure (Elements of Fiction Writing) and Setting (Elements of Fiction Writing)
, so I picked them up instead. They are both part of a series called Elements of Fiction Writing 5 Volume Set (Beginnings, Middles & Ends – Description – Setting – Characters & Viewpoint – Scene & Structure)
My Expectations: A while back in a critique meet-up, I heard people talking about active setting. I hadn’t read A Writer’s Guide to Active Setting: How to Enhance Your Fiction with More Descriptive, Dynamic Settings by Mary Buckham yet, so I still wasn’t clear what sort of magic made setting active and hoped this book might clear that up.
Intended Audience:
All fiction writers, but it may be a little advanced for early beginners.
What I liked: It was fun to learn about setting from the man who wrote Twister which has a vibrant setting and uses setting (weather) as a character. Not only did this book answer my questions about active setting, it inspired me, through straight-forward exercises, to think about setting differently in my novel. This book really clicked for me and helped me understand aspects of setting that I hadn’t thought of before.
What I didn’t like: The writing is very dense. Though the book isn’t very thick, it’s a slow read. Definitely worth it because I really felt aha! moments, but it felt like mining through thick stone to get to the gold.
Rating: ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ 4/5 I recommend this book.
My Expectations: Because I had such a good experience with Setting (Elements of Fiction Writing), I had high expectations for this book. I looked forward to seeing what sort of clarity Mr. Bickham could bring to my understanding of plot.
Intended Audience: Writers of fiction. Perhaps most useful to someone planning a novel. Though I plan to use his order of component segments of scene and sequel to evaluate my scenes during revision.
What I liked: This book did not disappoint. Mr. Bickham’s presentation and explanation of scene and sequel were eye-opening and gave me lots of ideas to evaluate and improve my draft.
What I didn’t like: This book, even more than setting, felt like a lot of reading for the amount of useful information. However, the information is so useful, that it makes it completely worthwhile.
A very interesting word! A tough read….you’ve made good use of voice here. I fear we’ve become too voyeyristic and too used to gun violence, crimes, etc and apathy is too prevalent. Perhaps that’s why I still take great hope in the teenagers’ recent movement that has caught fire, against gun violence. Whatever side you stand on with the issue, it is an awakening of activism that has been missing. Ah….your post has me ruminating here and isn’t that the mark of a good writer? To have your reader make connections, think about and move beyond the words you present? Well done!
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Thank you.
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The sense of passe in the witness of the crime is well illustrated here. You have bought it to the forefront of the form. “You refilled your glass I contemplated banausic windows”. Good form!
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Thank you.
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How terribly sad, that their lives turned back to normality so soon after someone else’s life was forever changed.
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A friend who is a cop told of a young girl being raped in a park. No one came to her aid because they thought they were having “fun.” Your poem speaks volumes to the disregard of those who just don’t want to “get involved.” Bravo!
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That’s a sad story. My poem was inspired by the case of Catherine Genovese in NY who was attacked and murdered in front of 38 reported witnesses: most were her neighbors.
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What a story… to be a bystander at such an event. I think calling the police is better at least than filming it to put on YouTube which seems more common these day… great word, but hard to use.
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Though filming instead of assisting is disgusting, the film would (hopefully) help with forensic psychology which is what inspired the poem. 🙂
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I linked this poem to Open Link Night #217 on dVerse https://dversepoets.com/2018/04/05/openlinknight-217/
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What a great word. Thank you for that.
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