
Massive Wonderment (2018) photograph by Maria L. Berg
The poem
A Review of Wonderment
At first glance, it can be confusing
and a little bit scary
the rush of heightened perception
opening the senses to floods of emotion
when facing the tremendous unknown
The impressive beauty of discovery
sparking the creative mind to
sort through the behemoth array
of memories and form
new associations
each texture astronomical
each smell pythonic
In moments of wonderment
it becomes easy to sit peacefully
without imposing hurry
and enjoy each herculean sight
I applaud wonderment its mighty perseverance
its elephantine stubborness
and ability to always stay in front
of the latest trends and fads
If I must find fault
it would be that sometimes
a sense of wonder can be too massive
overwhelming, even exhausting
but that is a warbly criticism
for sleep brings recovery
So bring on the wonderment
gigantic and colossal
Highly recommended
A to Z Challenge
whole step – interval of major 2nd, two half-steps between
wah-wah – is an imitative word (or onomatopoeia) for the sound of altering the resonance of musical notes.
warble – (of a bird) sing softly and with a succession of constantly changing notes.
NaPoWriMo
Prompt: a poetic review of something not usually reviewed
PAD Challenge
Prompt: write a massive poem
We need to regain a child’s capacity for wonder. I think kindness and gratitude are constant companions to those capable of seeing the world around them as endlessly miraculous.
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I love this critique so much.
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Thank you.
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