
In One Ear and Out the Other print from photograph of fabric glass by Maria L. Berg staged by Redbubble
The poem
The Best Rooms Are Too X-rated
Thinking through the bedrooms
so many bedrooms
moving and moving
trying to make something mine
I tried to settle on one
to mentally linger, loiter
describe in detail
like a capsule through time
I wanted it to be a happy place
full of growth and creative industry
accomplishment or at least good dreams
and for a moment I settled on your room
that first room
with only a mattress on the floor
we sat together in the chair
and blew bubbles through the fan
That room didn’t need anything else
for a few weeks
Then I thought of our room
before the storm
the tall ceilings and
I realized that all of the best rooms
the very best rooms
are too X-rated
to describe in this public space
for prying eyes
to savor
and embrace
The prompts
A to Z Challenge
X bracing – a constructional characteristic of a steel-string flat-top guitar established as standard by Martin around 1850.
𝄪 – the symbol for a “double sharp” which means to play the note 2 half-steps higher
NaPoWriMo
Prompt: write a poem about an old bedroom
PAD Challenge
Prompt:
- Write a look back poem and/or…
- Write a don’t look back poem. Because some folks just want to keep their eyes on the road ahead.
Reena’s Exploration Challenge
This morning, I found another prompt that I found inspiring. Over at Reena Saxena’s site, prompt # 131 is a quote that I could really relate to.
He had lost everything of value to him. There was an empty canvas on the easel, his colors and tools. What would he paint?
After Hurricane Katrina, when I had lost everything, I used fabric as my canvas. I had been working on an original technique of sewing layers and cutting that, when finished, looks like stained glass, thus “fabric glass.” The image at the top of the post “In One Ear and Out The Other” symbolizes trying to take all the bad and turn it into good.
My original pieces are all one of a kind, but I took pictures of them and loaded them onto Redbubble.com where they make them into prints, cards, clothing, pillows and other products.
What happens in the best rooms, stays in the best rooms. I love your In One Ear and Out the Other print!😍
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The Best Rooms are too X-rated. by Experience Writing
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The ‘first room with a mattress on the floor’ is so symbolic of a beginning.
Thanks for joining in!
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Simultaneously descriptive and leaving much to the imagination. I like the balance you found here.
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Thank you.
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