
The Prompt
For yesterday’s poetics prompt at the dVerse Poets Pub, Laura challenged us to think about last words and choose some famous last words to inspire our poem.
The Poem
The Answer
“Go on, get out! Last words are for fools who haven’t said enough.”
~ Karl Marx
How cruel and yet delicious
all those smiling, resting faces
all those relaxed, unworried death masks
forever frozen as last seen
in loving minds
How cruel and yet delicious
to know the time of one’s passing
to gather everyone ever loved together
to impart an answer
a lifetime sought
How cruel and yet delicious
the final not knowing but feeling certain
it will be there in time
feeling tongue-tipped and out-reached
seat-edged in life-searched readiness
How cruel and yet delicious
hearing gulps of held back sobs
tasting one’s own saliva, one’s juices
for a final time, becoming thick
with enzymes preparing for decay
smelling each familiar perfume
not disguising each unique sweat
visually sucking and sucking every
detail as if it will be the forever
memory: that cute sneeze,
that child’s whine,
that cuticle bitten,
that hair swept from that eye,
one’s own slowing, rattling breath and
then it’s there
it comes
the answer
THE ANSWER
electric, eye-bulging epiphany of all epiphanies
the room leans in edged, sharp
and everyone hears AH-HA!
before eyes dim, chest stills
and nothing more.
Great Poem Maria🙌
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Oh my heart this is incredibly potent!
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the repeats add a great deal to this deathbed scene – powerful the way you captured the small things the dying one is noting and this line especially
“smelling each familiar perfume”
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Thank you. It was a challenging prompt.
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So bittersweet an end.
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Sorrowful, yet beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you.
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reality check poetry. i like it.
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