Oct. 24 Prompts: Pulsing Beneath the Surface

Fear of Danger: Think of a warning you received from your parents as a child. Start your poem with “My mother says/said” or “My father says/said” and in the poem try to capture their fears behind the warnings.

For this poem you may want to try a Cascade. Here’s a cascade I wrote during OctPoWriMo last year:

Facing Day

This morning is a joy of possibilities
scattered with barriers and disappointments,
challenges with the potential to deter or discourage,
but there’s light I want to capture, so I persevere.

As if gratitude asks for trouble,
each tool soon breaks from obsolescence,
but I release the need and adapt, knowing
each morning is a joy of possibilities.

It’s not in my nature to see failure
as opportunity to fail better—I try
to fight the perfectionist, but she disapproves
scattering conflicts, barriers and disappointments.

However, starting each day in creative action
fills me with such complete satisfaction
even slow progress armors me against
challenges with the potential to deter or discourage.

I have to fight a dark fear of complete loss,
of the coming change that will rearrange
my view, values, and purpose,
but there’s light I want to capture, so I persevere.

Writober 2023

Today’s image prompt looks like a scary bunny to me, but it’s so close up, it could definitely be something else. And what’s up with those colored dots reflected in its eyes? What are those?

And if you want some more inspiration don’t forget 13 Days of Samhain.

Please link to your creations in the comments. I can’t wait to see what you come up with.

Published by marialberg

I am a fiction writer, poet and lyricist inspired by a life of leaping without hesitation. I was quoted and pictured in Ernie K-Doe: The R & B Emperor of New Orleans by Ben Sandmel. My short stories have been published in Five on the Fifth, Waking Writer, and Fictional Pairings. I am the author and photo-illustrator of Gator McBumpypants picturebooks. I enjoy clothing, costume and puzzle design.

3 thoughts on “Oct. 24 Prompts: Pulsing Beneath the Surface

  1. Condolences

    Father said…
    Mother said…

    Don’t yell, don’t complain

    and did both in an Italian opera
    without the melodies, lasting decades
    high c’s peeling the paint off walls.

    Dominance mattered and power
    the kind of power that said…

    Do as I say not as I do

    Father, mother, afraid, perhaps
    of being disobeyed, of being unmasked
    as loveless, vicious, brutes.

    Not all mothers and fathers
    are good enough. Trauma theory is all
    the rage these days, but simpler to say:

    Human nature is imperfect
    evolution hit and miss.
    It’s a DNA lottery game.

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