At the end of the Editor’s Note in the March/April 2019 Poets&Writers Magazine, Kevin Larimer writes, “I hope this issue provides a little inspiration, a bit of insight, and maybe even some companionship for what can feel like a long, lonely journey. Never give up.”

He’s talking about the writer’s life as a journey, but a poem can also be a journey. Like in the Ada Limόn poem “The Magnificent Frigatebird” that I am studying all week, she takes the reader to Rio where she first saw a Magnificent Frigatebird before she knew what it was called. She takes us on a journey of discovery and then wonder and imagination, all in one poem.
When writing a poem, I want to be more open to letting my poem take me on a journey. I felt that starting to happen in yesterday’s poem. Letting the poem take control and go where it wants to go felt a little uncomfortable, which I take as a sign that I’m getting somewhere.
The Prompts
NaPoWriMo : Write either a monostich, which is a one-line poem, or a poem made up of one-liner style jokes/sentiments.
PAD Challenge : Write a memory poem.
It’s open link night (OLN) at dVerse Poets Pub, so head on over and link up your poem, and read, enjoy, and comment on the poems by poets from around the world.
Today’s Poem
Lines From Fleeting Memories
I think I remember it was blue, wasn’t it?
That time when you didn’t turn left.
We ended up at that one spot, don’t you remember?
You know. That guy was there with the thing.
There were three parrots, I’m pretty sure; could have been five.
And a tiger. Remember that tiger?
I remember a mariachi band playing, because you had just said . . .
Oh, and our table was right there in the sand.
No wait. That was another time.
But now I’m sure. The sky was blue that day I knew.
I just knew.
I like the conversational tone and the questions here!
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The monstich form works so well here, I feel like I am eavesdropping on a one-sided conversation and my mind tries to fill in the remaining (that would be a really fun exercise to write the other side)
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Loose, exploratory and made for reading out loud. A lovely poem.
I love it when the poem takes over- that’s when real magic can happen. I’m glad you have found that too.
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I love the conversational tone of your poem, Maria, the use of questions and direct address. I also love the way the whole poem is enclosed in blue.
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
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Nice post 🌹🌹
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Maria, I really enjoy the cozy conversation the poet is having, either with a long term relationship/friendship partner, or maybe even with oneself. This would be a great one to read aloud maybe at a dVerse live event ::hint hint:: 🙂
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Glad you liked it.
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