I had pretty much spaced #Writober3 until this morning. Because I’m in New Orleans and my schedule is out of my hands, I won’t be as on top of my daily writing as I have been the last couple of years, but I’m going to try to do the daily poems for OctPoWriMo and I started adding pictures to a #Writober3 Pinterest board to inspire Halloween themed flash fiction.
The first pins I added are pictures I took from my immediate surroundings and a crow claw that I had on my camera from late July. I decided not to number the images this year. Just choose the image on the day it speaks to you. I am going to start with this one:
The theme for this year’s Halloween party is “Strange Brood” and this little lady definitely came from one. I think writing her story will set the tone for a great #Writober.
The OctPoWriMo theme for today is Surrender. Here’s the poem I came up with:
Callistemon
Callistemon, the bottle brush tree
releases her red tassels
as I surrender to the moment
From elation as the light shines
through the erect, lush hibiscus
to the frustration of a burning throat
and muddy head of acclimation
I focus on the detailed lines of a glistening dragonfly’s wing
She extends
tail to the sun
on the tip of a twig
fully splayed
Like a kite escaping its tether
on a fitful wind, I surrender
to each fleeting change
Revelations bombard by the hour
The days pass too quickly
Each stuffed full of muti-days of meaning
I swirl in the dance of confusing splendor,
facing my first regret of ever catching your eye while I recognize the truth of my bliss
The white flag
wavers
I yield
to whatever comes
Happy Reading and Writing!
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“facing my first regret of ever catching your eye while I recognize the truth of my bliss” Powerful line. I found myself reading it again and again.
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Wow! This is fantastic, Maria. Glad you are participating as well in OctPoWriMo. I look forward to getting to read your poetry. 🙂
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i like the movement in your poem. a very enjoyable read!
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