
I woke up in a winter wonderland. It started snowing yesterday evening, and the snow stuck. There was about a half foot of snow when the sun came out. I was so excited to try my reflection balls in the snow. What a great way to celebrate finishing my draft.
I Did It! I wrote THE END on my novel draft. Over 100,000 words in one month. I’m so excited and happy: not only because I pushed through to the end, but because I get to put it away while I read books, and work on revising my poems for the Chapbook challenge, and then I get to come back to it to start the new year off right.
Contradictory Abstract Nouns
Last month I looked at a different combination of abstract nouns each day, however each of them was related to the big five: beauty, truth, wisdom, love, or happiness. So this month I’m going to sort them back into the big five and review what I’ve learned. It’ll be interesting to see if collecting the images back into their big five counterparts leads to different ideas for the what their contradictions are, and what their unification looks like.

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For today’s Meeting the Bar prompt Laura challenges us to look back over our recent poems and make a poem out of twelve of our last lines to celebrated the twelfth month. What a great way to start my review of the poems I wrote in November for the Poem a Day challenge.
Forgetting Every Ending Leads to No Beginnings
You can’t be disappointed, if you have no expectations
perhaps forgetfulness is the cleanse
so cross that bridge over and over
in the glow of morning
as serious as life and death
that sweet resolve
to defraud the people pretending to live
the blue bottle in the icebox waiting to warm the way down
I knew that my dream holiday repast had finally come and gone
when I was given a cup of cocoa, and told to go upstairs
on second thought I see it like it is
nothing promised, no regrets
So that’s it. November is over. It was an amazing month. I’m looking forward to reviewing everything I created, and polishing it in the future. For now, I am going to get lost in some reading, exercise, and cleaning the house. Have a great weekend! I’ll be back some time next week.
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Promises are meant to be broken (at least sometimes)
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I love it. Your lines come together very well!
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Yayyy 😍 Congratulations on completing your novel draft! What an amazing achievement! I am so happy for you! 🥂 This is a gorgeous poem! ❤❤
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Can you share the links to these poems please. I like these lines.
“You can’t be disappointed, if you have no expectations”
“to defraud the people pretending to live”
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They are ending lines from the poems I wrote in November. The two you picked out are from “The Honestly Dishonest are the Scariest” (Nov. 11) https://experiencewriting.com/2022/11/11/the-honestly-dishonest-are-the-scariest/
and “Thinking Out Loud: Fulfillment or Disappointment” (Nov. 8) https://experiencewriting.com/2022/11/08/the-disappointment-of-fulfillment-is-intimate/
I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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Wise words in those last lines!
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Thank you.
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“perhaps forgetfulness is the cleanse”
Great poem and love your snowscape! Brrrr! Congratulations on completing your novel draft, what an achievement 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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The beginning and ending lines teach us a lesson, I suppose, if we follow this logic we are “people pretending to live”!
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what a delightful didactic composite you made – it reads so well
“forgetfulness is the cleanse
so cross that bridge over and over
in the glow of morning”
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Thank you.
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Congrats on finishing that first draft, and that is a LOT of words!! 😲 Really enjoyed that first stanza, the idea that forgetfulness is the cleanse with the imagery of the glow of morning feels so innocent. Great stuff! 👏👏
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Thank you.
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Welcome! 🌸💐🌸
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Congratulations on the word count, Marial! Impressive! Your poem of last lines falls together in a wise and sensible way.
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Thank you.
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This is a wonderful blend of last lines … ending with the perfect line!
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