Writober 2025: Day Sixteen Banshees>Response Post
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🎃OctPoWriMo 🦇Writober Flash Fiction 👻Halloween Photography Challenge
Today’s Theme: Banshees
These are my responses to the prompt post for Day 16 of Writober: Screams in the Night
OctPoWriMo
The Spirit of the Party
I smell that cherry and oak
smoke of your cigar
glowing from behind the veil
and burning like a hot glowing
forgotten stove
I strum the guitar
and stare into the fire pit
Ah, there you are
it’s been a long time
but I hope you’ve lowered your expectations
there won’t be a party tonight
no snacks, no small talk
or clinking glasses
no lubricated souls for you to slip into
no rosy-cheeked mask for you to wear
I will continue to bore you
until there’s nothing to hold
you here
I hold the pen to the page and listen
large loopy letters provide no insight
though they seem pressing
important secret knowledge
I shiver and wrap my cardigan
more tightly around my neck
Ah, there you are
my arm hairs standing on end
as my hand moves
all I want to do is sleep
but like you I don’t want to miss a thing
Writober Flash Fiction Challenge
The Banshee
Molly grabbed her sister’s hand. The sound had woken them before dawn. One hair-raising scream and just when they thought it had stopped, another scream. After breakfast, their father sent them out to play in the woods behind the house.
“But Dad, it’s out there. Don’t you hear it?” Molly pleaded.
Dad only patted her head and pointed to the door. When they reached their favorite climbing tree, they saw it. That’s when Molly grabbed her sister’s hand. All of the branches had been stripped from their tree and a giant head sat on top screaming and screaming.
“I don’t like this,” Molly whispered. “I don’t feel good. Let’s creep back into our room and play.”
When they got home, Dad was sprawled at the base of the stairs, not breathing.
Molly screamed.
Halloween Photography Challenge

For today’s images I used one of my demon drawings layered with a head-shaped paper-cut filter and some crinkly paper for hair. I took photos in the rich black and white setting.

Loved this, Maria. The “cherry and oak” cigar through the veil with the “hot glowing forgotten stove” is such a tactile haunting. The refrain “Ah, there you are” feels like a soft exorcism.
“I will continue to bore you…”, loopy letters that “seem pressing,” cardigan cinched, arm hairs alert: they all perfectly capture insomnia’s FOMO perfectly. Bravo for making quiet the loudest thing in the room!
~ Oizys.
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Thank you. I’m glad you responded to the sensory details (something I’m working on).
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