Losing Sense

Fear of Losing a Sense by Maria L. Berg 2024

These are my responses to the Writober prompt post Fear of Loss of a Sense.

OctPoWriMo

Fear of Losing My Senses

If I couldn’t hear his purrs
morning cuddles would be like
mushy-mashed-peas-with-body-
odor after three days

If I couldn’t feel his soft fur
morning cuddles would be like
car-horns-blaring-bitter-
neon-green motor-oil

If I couldn’t see his green eyes and pink nose
morning cuddles would be like
rotten-cilantro-hot-sharp-
whispered-unintelligible voices

If I couldn’t put my nose to his neck
and smell his fur, morning cuddles
would be like blue-speckled-quinoa
in the rice cooker-crunching

But he would still do tricks for treats
and I would still try to type around him
and we would be like cocoa-super-soft warm blankets-
quarter in the vibrating bed delicious

Writober Flash Fiction

Frank Knew What to Do

When Frank said he knew what to do, I never should have trusted him. But with my face splattered all over the news as a wanted terrorist, I couldn’t exactly go to a doctor. I was a victim of that bomb. The heat of it, the force, almost tore my face right off. It’s a miracle I lived long enough for Frank to do this to me. I didn’t make that bomb, or set it off.

But I could imagine why they think it’s me. I like to express my opinions online. And, well, I’ve got some pretty strong opinions, especially about this Barry Castinetta guy who’s buying up the whole city and kickin’ us out of our apartments. He’s a serious piece of work and now he thinks he’s a leader. Running for senate. I bet he thinks he can be president. So, maybe I said some things that people could say were inflammatory, like “I’m gonna come to your rally, and blow you to smithereens.”

I mean, I didn’t mean it. Not literally. I guess there’s not a lot of room for interpretation at this point, but I was just typin’ stuff. I wasn’t gonna do it. Sure, I did go to the rally, but just to make sure the media didn’t show me some deep fake. I wanted to see the pestilence for myself. So many people out there cheering for him. Clapping for every stupid word he said. I was getting hot, like really mad and then BOOM. I was thrown back. Like flying, and Frank was pulling me out of there.

Frank was my cell mate when I got sent up for that B&E that I also did not do. Anyway, we’re like brothers. So I passed out, and when I woke up, we were in this windowless black room with bright lights and all this medical equipment and Frank’s like “Hold still. I know what to do.” And I just sat there, thinkin’ since when does Frank know anything about doctorin’. And what did he do? He stuck a freakin’ cast, one of those hard plaster casts, all over my face.  He covered everything. My ears, my hair, my mouth, my nose. The only things not covered in plaster is my eyes and my nostrils.

It’s hell. The itch is torture. I can’t hear nothin’. He’s feeding me through a tube in my arm. Who knows what kind of mangled mess is under there, and Frank won’t tell me if he shaved my head. I punched him a few times, but he still wouldn’t say. He just threatened to stop feedin’ me, so I stopped. I know he threatened me because he wrote it down and held it up for me to see. But I’m gettin’ pretty good at readin’ his lips.

He paces around and talks to himself a lot. I’m startin’ to think I didn’t know Frank as well as I thought I did. He seems to have been holdin’ a grudge for when his girl started bangin’ me, and then disappeared.

Damn this itchin’. When I was a kid, I broke my arm jumpin’ out of a tree on an unsuspecting kid, and I remember that saw they used to cut the cast off. I’m thinkin’ I don’t like the idea of Frankie doin’ that: that saw so close to my ears, my face. And all that dead skin, layers of face sloughin’ off. If I wasn’t hungry for a giant juicy steak and some bourbon, or just a damned beer. If I didn’t need to hear some traffic, or some shouting, anything; I might just keep this cast on. Who knows what’s under there. If he didn’t shave my head, won’t I get scalped when he pulls off the plaster?

Halloween Photography Challenge

For today’s images, I took an earless headshape cut, over an iridescent plastic filter and drew the Xs for sewn-shut eyes and mouth, and the holes for the lost nose. Then I used the blue-only setting in my camera for the fear. I wondered if the blue only setting would work with the blue depth effect and it does, so that’s a new technique to think about during composition.

Tunetober

For this week’s challenge, I put my recorder next to my bed, and recorded kitty scratching at my bedroom window. He doesn’t believe I should sleep at night.

Sewtober

This week for my treat, I finished ten quilt pockets so I have a complete October for my calendar quilt. I’ll use it for November too.

I had no idea what a fun treat this would be until I had all the squares and started arranging them into possible patterns. I had a lot of fun.

My sewing trick is something I think I’ve known for a long time, but never really used. Now, I realize how much thread and time it saves.

Trick: When sewing several pieces at once, as in the ten pockets I made this week, finish off the first piece with a quick back-stitch, then shove the next piece up to the needle and keep sewing.

Piece after piece without cutting the thread

Make a string of all your pieces one after another. Then, when you’ve back-stitched your final piece, clip your thread close to the machine before pulling the pieces out.

Chain of quilt pockets to snip apart.

A quick snip separates each of your pieces. I love my small orange Fiskars for quick snips. Depending on how you usually pull your piece from your machine and snip your threads, this could save you about a foot of thread per piece.

Another trick: The cat has taken to napping on my ironing board with his head on the iron (when it’s off 👻😼). It’s adorable, but he leaves a mess of shed, so I was really glad to have my lint roller handy.

Happy Writober!

Getting excited for Halloween?

See you tomorrow!

Fear of Loss of a Sense

Welcome back for the twenty-seventh day of Writober. It’s Sunday, and the last day we’ll be looking at the universal fear of loss of a sense.

Loss of Sense by Maria L. Berg 2024

Fear of loss of a sense to most, I think, would instantly be the fear of losing sight, but what about not being able to hear, or feel touch? My father lost his sense of smell, and can’t taste anything (a package deal). For him, this has its ups and downs. He doesn’t smell the terrible smells he makes working in his shop, or fixing the septic, but he also can’t taste the wonderful ways my mom cooks the salmon he catches.

By looking back at this week’s fears, the aspects of the fear of mutilation: injury, attack, dismemberment, torture, parasites, and loss of a sense, have you gotten any closer to any of your core causes of these fears? What memories have come up for you that you may not have thought of since they happened?

Rhetorical Device: Simile

A simile is a figure of speech comparing one thing to another, usually using like or as. Similes are important in all kinds of writing. However, be careful of cliché similes, the ones that are used all the time, and don’t use too many similes. There are some good tips for creating and using similes in this quick article:

What is a Simile? from Masterclass.com

Fighting Fear of the Blank Page: How’s your relationship with the page coming along? Which approaches have been your favorite so far?

Review this week’s techniques: Try one you didn’t try yet, or use your favorite from this week.

*Quick Note about links in this post: I am an amazon associate, so most of the links in my post will take you to amazon products. If you buy from these links, I will make some pennies which will help me pay for this site and my creative endeavors.

OctPoWriMo

Poetry Toolbox

These are quick exercises that I hope you’ll do every day. We will build on these exercises throughout the month.

  1. Word list: Write down the first ten words you think of when you think of fear. Any words at all. Anything that comes to mind. Then choose your three favorite and say them aloud a few times until you hear the accented and unaccented syllables (if more than one syllable) and notice the duration of each syllable. Add the least connected exact rhyme, and the strangest slant rhyme. (Inspired by Frances Mayes’ list of a hundred favorite words in The Discovery of Poetry)

I created this Excel Spreadsheet for you to use to collect and explore your fear words.

OctPoWriMo wordlistDownload

2. Sensory Imagery: In your journal or a word processing file, fill in these lines as quickly as you can. Notice they are slightly different from last week. You may want to revisit one or two in more detail if you’re inspired and have time.

I will see

I will hear

I will carry

I will smell

I will follow

The slice of

The pain of

I will taste

The color of

I will witness

I will touch

(Inspired by a week one exercise in the poetry chapter of The Portable MFA in Creative Writing)

3. More Sensory Imagery: Answer sensory questions about fear of loss of a sense. This is a good exercise for coming up with similes.

4. Poetry collection study: Search the collection for similes. Are there any exciting, surprising, and unique comparisons? Which are your favorite? Which didn’t work for you?

Poetry Building

Simile: similes are often used in sensory description especially for taste and smell. Something smells like strawberries, or tastes like diesel fuel (shouldn’t be tasting that). Similes provide information by comparing something that isn’t familiar to something that is. Similes can be a great place to create surprise in your writing. Try comparing two things you have never compared before. How are they alike? Create a simile.

Example poem: Today we’re looking at Last Words by Mary Jo Salter, copied here from blog. bestamericanpoetry.com for educational purposes.

LAST WORDS

by Mary Jo Salter

Forgive me for not writing sober,
I mean sooner, but I almost don’t
dare see what I write, I keep mating mistakes,
I mean making, and I’m wandering
if I’ve inherited what
my father’s got.

I first understood it when he tried
to introduce me to somebunny:
“This is my doctor,” he said,
then didn’t say more, “my daughter.”
The man kindly nodded
out the door.
I thought: is this dimension
what I’m headed for?

I mean dementia.|
Not Autheimer’s, but that kind he has,
possessive aphasia: oh that’s good,
I meant to say progressive.
Talk about euthanasia!
I mean euphemasia,
nice words inside your head not there,
and it’s not progress at all.

No, he’s up against the boil
after years now of a sad, slow wall
and he’s so hungry,
I mean angry.

Me too. I need to get my rhymes in
while I still mean.  I mean can.

from Zoom Rooms by Mary Jo Salter ( Knopf, 2022).


How does this poem make you feel? How does Salter use language to explore fear?

Today’s prompt: Write a poem exploring the fear of losing a sense using simile.

Form: If you’re looking for more of a challenge, write your poem as an n+7. Use a poem you wrote this week and replace all the nouns. Or, try one of the other variations from woodlandpattern.org. Want to speed things up and force yourself to use the seventh word and not a different choice? Here’s an n+7 machine.

Write your poem and post it to your site (blog/ website/ other), then post a link in the chat. You may also post your poem in the chat if you do not have a place to post it. If you are posting as “someone” or “anonymous,” please put your name at the end of the poem. Throughout the day, please check back when you can to read and encourage other poets, to learn from each other, and enjoy each other’s efforts.

Writober Flash Fiction

Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end with conflict that leads to change in less than a thousand words (no minimal word count) inspired by one of the images in the Mutilation folder of the Writober 2024 Pinterest board. How could fear of loss of a sense play a role in your story?

Novel Prep

Now that we know more about our main characters, let’s revisit our main scenes and see if we can increase the stakes even more. What would be the worst thing that could happen to our character in each situation? Use this month’s study of universal fears to brainstorm scenes for each. What scene could have ego death be the worst thing that could happen to the MC or the Antagonist? Brainstorm a scene in which separation is the worst thing that could happen. You get the idea. Can you imagine a scene in which your MC loses one of his/her senses either permanently or temporarily?

Halloween Photography Challenge

Take a photograph that depicts loss of a sense or fear of loss of a sense and link to your photo in the chat.

Tunetober

How did it go? Is your tune getting scarier as it develops? This week, put all the pieces together and finish up your tune. Don’t forget to link it to the chat on Halloween.

Sewtober

This week, finish up your costume, and your decoration. Share your creation in the chat on Halloween.

Get Moving

Okay, this is just something I found that I think looks really fun, but it’s too expensive and I would probably break myself if I tried it, but Kangoo jumps jumping shoes are a real thing.

Now, grab what inspires you, and create!

Don’t forget to come back & link in the comments.

See you soon!

Parasitic Clarity

Fear of Parasites by Maria L. Berg 2024

These are my responses to the Writober prompt post Fear of Parasites.

OctPoWriMo

I started a poem that grew with each line like a parasitic tapeworm, but I like the Clarity Pyramid form so much, I wrote one of those to share instead.

FEAR
of all
parasites

tiniest monsters
slip into our systems
feeding on us to our demise

“he says he recalls memory loss”

Writober Flash Fiction

Ayesha wasn’t afraid of any bathroom. She thought she had seen it all, even using a men’s room or two when the lines for the lady’s were down the hall and around the corner. Which was how she had expected the line for this bathroom to be. She had waited an hour to get into this Halloween bash of the century, and the haunted house alone was totally worth it, room after room of animatronics and actors, jump scares and crazed clowns. They really went all out. But that was just the beginning, there was a DJ in the main theater, and a band up on the roof. The place was packed, so why wasn’t there a line for this bathroom?

As she reached for the door handle wondering if it would be sticky, two barely dressed “witches” pushed past her as if she wasn’t there. The door was still closing behind them, and Ayesha was still assessing if she was more shocked or pissed, when they screamed and came running out. The follower witch looked back at Ayesha and said, “Don’t go in there. It’s horrible! So disgusting!” They ran off and disappeared up the stairs.

Disgusting, huh? Ayesha thought. She took it as a dare, imagining every disgusting place she had popped a squat, trying to remember the worst club, gas station, outhouse, and port-o-let. There had been so many.

As she opened the door, she got a strong whiff of sulfur, like giardia farts or a pile of rotten eggs. This bathroom was a claustrophobic closet with a mirror and sink to her right and one toilet straight ahead. The florescent light flickered over the mirror, and water slapped on rust-stained tiles under her feet. Moist, brown, wadded paper towels, and other disgusting discards clustered along the walls. Ayesha agreed this bathroom was definitely disgusting. But it was the toilet, or rather what was in the toilet that gained the bathroom the prize for most disgusting.

Ayesha walked right up to it, thinking it was another animatronic. The giant, oozing green, single cell with a gaping mouth and rows of eyes propped up in the toilet had wiggling tentacles reaching in every direction. “Not their best work,” Ayesha said aloud, reaching out to touch it, but then it shivered and spit out mini versions of itself. It shook and roared. It’s tentacles reached toward her as she backed away from the approaching hoard of mini-monsters swim-crawling toward to feet. She shuffled backward. She needed to run, but she couldn’t take her eyes off it’s eyes as a deep voice repeated her name swirling in her mind.

Ayesha figured she slipped and hit her head, because she didn’t remember the rest of the night when she woke up at home the next morning. She had slept in her clothes. Her stomach rumbled, gassy. The room smelled like sulphur. Her pants felt tight, and when she looked in the mirror, her stomach was distended. Her name echoed in her head. It was calling her. They were calling her. She had thought she was so tough, but she would never use a public toilet again.

Halloween Photography Challenge

Today’s filter cut was inspired by the public bathroom parasite image in this week’s Pinterest folder. I had fun playing with my camera’s single color effects in the mirrorworld. Then turned the security light into a parasite using an iridescent plastic filter while holding an umbrella. 🎃👻

Happy Writober!

Getting excited for Halloween?

See you tomorrow!

Fear of Parasites

Welcome back for the twenty-sixth day of Writober. During this fourth week we’re exploring the universal fear of mutilation. Today we’re looking at fear of parasites.

Fear of Parasites by Maria L. Berg 2021

A parasite is an organism that lives in or on an organism of another species (its host) and benefits by deriving nutrients at the other’s expense. Many great horror movies like the Alien franchise and The Thing grew from a fear of parasites.

When I was a Peace Corps Volunteer in West Africa fear of parasites was a part of daily life. Real life monsters like guinea worm maim and cripple, amoebas attacked my gut and broke down my immune system, malaria can kill and when survived can come out of dormancy and recur. And those are only a few examples.

Literary Device: Abstract and Concrete Nouns

An abstract noun represents an intangible idea. It can’t be measured or physically sensed. The most common abstract nouns are love, beauty, truth, happiness, and good/evil.

A concrete noun is a physical object. A person, place, or thing that can be detected by our sensory organs and can be measured.

Fighting Fear of the Blank Page: One way to fight fear of the blank page is to pre-write, and do some research.

The abstraction study sheet: I started my focus on abstractions three years ago, and it never gets old. During my study, I have created a study sheet for myself that helps me dive into an abstraction and gather lots of concrete nouns and ideas that I connect with the abstraction. So here is a writing tool exclusive for you Writober die-hards still playing along.

You’ll notice an expanded section of sensory details including “line” which means what kind of line is it? Is it jagged, straight, dotted, curved, etc. And animal, insect, weather are all asking what this abstract noun makes you think of in these categories. As for the fight or flight, control, and bias cues, here’s a post that explains that, actually it’s a progression of three posts from April of 2023 that explain it:

Poetry Month Challenges Day 2

Poetry Month Challenges Day 16

Poetry Month Challenges Day 30

I also explore the psychology and philosophy of the abstract noun and look up any famous quotes that use it.

*Quick Note about links in this post: I am an amazon associate, so most of the links in my post will take you to amazon products. If you buy from these links, I will make some pennies which will help me pay for this site and my creative endeavors.

OctPoWriMo

Poetry Toolbox

These are quick exercises that I hope you’ll do every day. We will build on these exercises throughout the month.

  1. Word list: Write down the first ten words you think of when you think of fear. Any words at all. Anything that comes to mind. Then choose your three favorite and say them aloud a few times until you hear the accented and unaccented syllables (if more than one syllable) and notice the duration of each syllable. Add the least connected exact rhyme, and the strangest slant rhyme. What abstract noun would you connect to your word? (Inspired by Frances Mayes’ list of a hundred favorite words in The Discovery of Poetry)

I created this Excel Spreadsheet for you to use to collect and explore your fear words.

OctPoWriMo wordlistDownload

2. Sensory Imagery: In your journal or a word processing file, fill in these lines as quickly as you can. Notice they are slightly different from last week. You may want to revisit one or two in more detail if you’re inspired and have time.

I will see

I will hear

I will carry

I will smell

I will follow

The slice of

The pain of

I will taste

The color of

I will witness

I will touch

(Inspired by a week one exercise in the poetry chapter of The Portable MFA in Creative Writing)

3. More Sensory Imagery: Ask yourself sensory questions about fear of parasites.

4. Choose a poetry collection: Looking through the collection, pick out the abstract nouns. How are they used? What concrete nouns are used to describe them? What imagery is used?

Poetry Building

Abstract and Concrete Nouns: Since the earliest poems, poets have used imagery, metaphor (we’ll get into metaphor next week) and rhetorical devices to express abstract concepts. Abstractions by themselves are vague and different people define them differently. That’s why it’s so important to explore concrete imagery with specific detail when exploring abstractions.

Example poem: Today we’re looking at Ghosts by Ella Wheeler Wilcox, copied here from poets.org for educational purposes.

Ghosts

Ella Wheeler Wilcox

    There are ghosts in the room.
As I sit here alone, from the dark corners there
They come out of the gloom,
And they stand at my side and they lean on my chair

    There’s a ghost of a Hope
That lighted my days with a fanciful glow,
In her hand is the rope
That strangled her life out. Hope was slain long ago.

    But her ghost comes to-night
With its skeleton face and expressionless eyes,
And it stands in the light,
And mocks me, and jeers me with sobs and with sighs.

    There’s the ghost of a Joy,
A frail, fragile thing, and I prized it too much,
And the hands that destroy
Clasped its close, and it died at the withering touch.

    There’s the ghost of a Love,
Born with joy, reared with hope, died in pain and unrest,
But he towers above
All the others—this ghost; yet a ghost at the best,

    I am weary, and fain
Would forget all these dead: but the gibbering host
Make my struggle in vain—
In each shadowy corner there lurketh a ghost.

This poem is in the public domain. Published in Poem-a-Day on October 19, 2024, by the Academy of American Poets.


How does this poem make you feel? What stands out to you? Notice how the poet personifies the abstractions.

Today’s prompt: Write a poem exploring the fear of parasites using both abstract and concrete nouns.

Form: If you’re looking for more of a challenge, write a clarity pyramid (or series of clarity pyramids) using an abstract noun as the title (first word).

Write your poem and post it to your site (blog/ website/ other), then post a link in the chat. You may also post your poem in the chat if you do not have a place to post it. If you are posting as “someone” or “anonymous,” please put your name at the end of the poem. Throughout the day, please check back when you can to read and encourage other poets, to learn from each other, and enjoy each other’s efforts.

Writober Flash Fiction

Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end with conflict that leads to change in less than a thousand words (no minimal word count) inspired by one of the images in the Mutilation folder of the Writober 2024 Pinterest board. How does fear of parasites affect your character?

Novel Prep

Now that we’ve looked at our MC and antagnoist’s daily routines. What is it that they dream about. What do they wish was different? What did they want to be and do when they were younger? Why didn’t it work out, or why haven’t they achieved it yet? If they could go back and change one thing, what would it be?

Halloween Photography Challenge

Take a photograph that depicts fear of parasites, and link to your photo in the chat.

Get Moving

Now that you’ve read all the prompts and have all these ideas running around in your head, it’s time for motion. Some suggestions:

Still looking for something different? How about this Prancercise video from 1989.

Now, grab what inspires you, and create!

Don’t forget to come back & link in the comments.

See you soon!

Torture Chamber

A Fear of Torture by Maria L. Berg 2024

These are my responses to the Writober prompt post Fear of Torture.

OctPoWriMo

But to What Specific Purpose?

It’s broken, and I can’t fix it
This complicated warning system
meant to keep me from harm
has too many switches stuck on
firing and firing its alarms
but like the broken light switch
in the hall, they flicker, sending
new jolts to the already excited

Hands tied, attempts
at relief break other systems.
Vicious cycles of deadening
and  strengthening
until every sound is a threat
and every touch is a cut.

The harness holds
my eyes open, so
I can’t look away.
What is the question
I haven’t answered?
The secret I hold
that can’t be pulled
from my lips?

Electricity and
water don’t mix, yet I
am electricity in water.
Strapped in contortions
while every sharpened instrument
on display is internalized
and actively trying to carve
a way out. The electric eel
has its warning system
it says Stay Away, but
I can’t stay away from
my own body, my captor,
the deliverer of pain.

Writober Flash Fiction

Tipping

After his divorce, Darren started doing things he used to do before he was married. This night, as he drove past Hesher’s Farm, he remembered how funny he had thought it was to tip cows. He and his buddies, a bunch of beers, and some sleeping cows, had been a laugh-riot. Or so he remembered.

He parked on the side of the road, and started climbing the fence. chuckling as he sized up the closest cow, but then a bright light filled the sky like someone had switched on a spotlight from above . He felt a tug that became a yank. He held on tight to the fence as he was tipped upside down, his feet flying up over his head, but he couldn’t hang on. As he flailed higher and higher, his car and a few cows lifting up below him, all he could think about was the probing to come.

Why did everyone get probed? he wondered. Wouldn’t the first dozen or so probes reveal any useful information they wanted to know? Wouldn’t they have much more advanced ways to scan the human body without being anally intrusive? Could it be that he and the cow had more in common than just being Earth species? As the ship opened and pulled him in, Darren wondered at what age the aliens had their mid-life crises.

Halloween Photography Challenge

For today’s images I was thinking about how torture is using our own nerve endings against us, so I cut a new filter of what that looks like to me and played with it in the mirrorworld.

Happy Writober!

Getting in the Halloween Spirit?

See you tomorrow!

Fear of Torture

Welcome back for the twenty-fifth day of Writober. During this fourth week we’re exploring the universal fear of mutilation. Today we’re looking at fear of torture.

Fear of Torture by Maria L. Berg 2024

Amnesty International put out this video about their efforts to stop torture around the world:

Though I find the title “Torture Animation” off-putting, the message about the reality of fear of torture fits today’s topic.

Rhetorical Devices: Pleonasm & Tautology

Pleonasm is using more words than are necessary, similar to redundancy. For example: “burning flame,” because a flame is already burning, and also burns.

For tautology I found this video from Grammar Monster:

Both tautology and pleonasm can be considered a fault in writing, but can be used for rhythm and emphasis.

Fighting Fear of the Blank Page: Fear of the blank page can be torture, but once we get past it, writing is so fun.

Net of possibilities: I created this technique as a way to use up some leftover puzzle tags with images on them. Draw a “net” on a sheet of paper:

Cut circles of images. I used sections from paintings, mostly famous old paintings, but you can use any images you like. Choose your images at random and put them on your net one at a time, noting down what sparks for you in each image and connections that come up between the images. I talk more about it in my post, Multiplicity: the dot that becomes a universe.

*Quick Note about links in this post: I am an amazon associate, so most of the links in my post will take you to amazon products. If you buy from these links, I will make some pennies which will help me pay for this site and my creative endeavors.

OctPoWriMo

Poetry Toolbox

These are quick exercises that I hope you’ll do every day. We will build on these exercises throughout the month.

  1. Word list: Write down the first ten words you think of when you think of fear. Any words at all. Anything that comes to mind. Then choose your three favorite and say them aloud a few times until you hear the accented and unaccented syllables (if more than one syllable) and notice the duration of each syllable. Add the least connected exact rhyme, and the strangest slant rhyme. (Inspired by Frances Mayes’ list of a hundred favorite words in The Discovery of Poetry)

I created this Excel Spreadsheet for you to use to collect and explore your fear words.

OctPoWriMo wordlistDownload

2. Sensory Imagery: In your journal or a word processing file, fill in these lines as quickly as you can. Notice they are slightly different from last week. You may want to revisit one or two in more detail if you’re inspired and have time.

I will see

I will hear

I will carry

I will smell

I will follow

The slice of

The pain of

I will taste

The color of

I will witness

I will touch

(Inspired by a week one exercise in the poetry chapter of The Portable MFA in Creative Writing)

3. More Sensory Imagery: Ask yourself sensory questions about fear of torture.

4. Choose a poetry collection: After close reading some of the poems in the collection, are you seeing new themes, and ideas? Choose three more poems that you now think connect with the ones you studied, and explore the similarities and differences.

Poetry Building

Pleonasm and Tautology: As a poet, both of these rhetorical devices seem like things I would want to diligently cut out of my drafts, but for today, let’s play with ways that repeating what we say in other, yes redundant, ways can expand on what we want to say for emphasis.

Example poem: Today we’re looking at At the Retirement Home by Tony Barnstone, copied here from poets.org for educational purposes.

At the Retirement Home

Tony Barnstone

U.S. Soldier, 194th Armored Regiment, retired, Brainerd, Minnesota

I’ve had both knees replaced. I’ve got a steel
pin in my hip. I don’t hear you so good,
but I’m not stupid, son. How would you feel,
surviving the Bataan Death March, no food
for days, no water, and the ones who fell
behind were bayoneted where they lay,
and now you’re marching off to death? Real hell
is not old age, though. No, taking away
the rights we died for, saying torture’s right,
that’s hell. Hand me the iron and those shirts,
would you? Thanks, son. As long as I have fight
in me I’ll love this country till it hurts.
And it does. This is worse than what I saw
overseas. Torture. In America.
 

From Tongue of War: WWII Poems (BKMK Press, 2009) by Tony Barnstone. Copyright © 2009 by Tony Barnstone.


How does this poem make you feel? What stands out to you?

Today’s prompt: Write a poem exploring the fear of torture using pleonasm and/or tautology.

Form: If you’re looking for more of a challenge, write your poem as a soliloquy in which the speaker uses pleonasm and tautology.

Write your poem and post it to your site (blog/ website/ other), then post a link in the chat. You may also post your poem in the chat if you do not have a place to post it. If you are posting as “someone” or “anonymous,” please put your name at the end of the poem. Throughout the day, please check back when you can to read and encourage other poets, to learn from each other, and enjoy each other’s efforts.

Writober Flash Fiction

Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end with conflict that leads to change in less than a thousand words (no minimal word count) inspired by one of the images in the Mutilation folder of the Writober 2024 Pinterest board. How does fear of torture affect your character?

Novel Prep

What is your MC’s daily routine? What, where, and how does s/he eat? How does s/he travel? Who does s/he interact with? Where does s/he work? What is a regular work day like? What irritates, excites, surprises, tires your MC during the day? What is daily home life like? Try to think of every minute detail. Then do the same for the antagonist.

Halloween Photography Challenge

Take a photograph that depicts fear of torture, and link to your photo in the chat.

Get Moving

Now that you’ve read all the prompts and have all these ideas running around in your head, it’s time for motion. Some suggestions:

Many people find exercise akin to torture, but I hope my movement suggestions have made getting moving fun. Choose the suggestion that has been least torturous and get moving. My favorite is my new twister disc. I absolutely love it.

Now, grab what inspires you, and create!

Don’t forget to come back & link in the comments.

See you soon!

Being Dismembered

These are my responses to the Writober prompt post Fear of Dismemberment.

OctPoWriMo

It’s Open Link Night at dVerse Poets Pub, so head over and link up your poem and read and comment on the other dVerse poets’ offerings.

Dismemberment Arguments

I don’t want to write about dismemberment.
I am afraid of dismemberment : a foot to guinea worm, an eye
to a chemical spill, a finger or two to a bansaw, a breast
or leg to cancer. Could there be a different definition
of dismemberment?  Like Diss member meant

I don’t say “Diss” for “this”, or use the word “diss”
meaning put down, but if it keeps me from
writing about dismemberment I’d say
What diss member meant was
our group is sharp and meaty
Don’t diss what a member meant to diss group
separating diss member meant we’re missing
artichokes and slimy oysters
diss member’s dismemberment left us
one woman down for the fund raiser,
one runner down for the three-legged race,
one gambler down for the one-armed bandit

Doesn’t dimemberment save lives?
Maybe diss member who got dismembered
got severe frostbite which led to gangrene
and amputation was the only thing to save her
or diss member who wasn’t dismembered
was trapped in a rock slide and was stuck
where no one could get to him
leaving a hand behind was the only way to get free

And these days prosthetics are so sci-fi
they can even be controlled by your mind
We can adapt and change. The brain
compensates for new realities.
But why the phantom limbs?
I’m still afraid of dimemberment.
I’m not going to write about dismemeberment.

Writober Flash Fiction

Crucial Limbs

Victor woke up shivering yet feeling like his blood was on fire, heart pulsing in his head, his neck, his wrists. A crash and high pitched squeaks made his skin crawl. Imagining rats crawling on him, he jumped up and looked around the dark alley, but didn’t recognize anything.

A hazy memory of Saffron, the exotic raven-haired, porcelain-skinned  woman who was so eager last night, excited him all over again. Yet no blood rushed anywhere. Weak-kneed, he fell against a brick wall and felt thanks for its rough coolness against his cheek. His friend, the brick wall lead him out of the alley toward the sounds of morning: traffic, shopkeepers opening up spraying puke and piss from the sidewalk, people rushing to work talking on their cell-phones. 

The alley’s shade felt like a separate world, as if he had woken up into a new dimension and was stumbling back toward the world he knew. As he stepped closer to the rectangle of light  ahead, Victor suddenly felt afraid. Maybe he was worried who would see him. He couldn’t remember ever having a hangover this bad; he must be in an embarrassing state of dishevel. But he had to get home somehow, and that meant leaving this alley. He stepped out into the sunlight, squinting in the glare. The morning sun already hot and humid, hit him like a wall of fire.

He smelled smoke and looked all around before he realized that his arms were aflame. One of the shopkeepers turned his sidewalk spraying hose on him, and dialed 911. In the ambulance they covered him in wet wool blankets to stop the flames that kept erupting anywhere that sunlight hit him. After waking from the medically-induced coma, the doctor explained that they had removed his horribly burned arms, but were able to save his legs. Victor wasn’t really listening. All he could think about was the blood pulsing in the doctor’s neck. He was so hungry. As the doctor checked his vitals, Victor kept trying to sink his teeth in, but he couldn’t push himself up, or pull the doctor close enough.

Halloween Photography Challenge

Inspired by today’s example poem and my answers to What color is dismemberment? I combined pink, yellow, and gray half-color filters, and used different body part filters I’ve cut over the years. I had fun incorporating some fall leaves into the photos or the security light across the street, then combined the photos into a gallery.

Happy Writober!

Getting in the Halloween Spirit?

See you tomorrow!

Fear of Dismemberment

Welcome back for the twenty-fourth day of Writober. During this fourth week we’re exploring the universal fear of mutilation. Today we’re looking at fear of dismemberment.

Fear of Dismemberment by Maria L. Berg 2024

While looking at fear of dismemberment this morning, I came across something very scary and interesting. There is a rare mental condition called Body Integrity Dysphoria “where you feel that a limb or healthy body part shouldn’t be part of your body. You’re aware that this body part is healthy; you can still feel, use and move this body part, but you don’t believe it should be yours. You want to live life without the use of that limb. As a result, you might ask a healthcare provider for an amputation or attempt a self-amputation of your healthy limb.” (from clevelandclinic.org)

I find this fascinating. Dismemberment is so frightening, and yet there are some humans who crave it. Something to think about.

Rhetorical Device: Prolepsis

Prolepsis is a figure of speech in which the speaker raises an objection and then immediately answers it. Prolepsis comes from the Greek meaning preconception, anticipation. In literature it is also known as “flash forward” or “prophecy.”

The prolepsis of rhetoric is a speaker predicting objections to their argument and answering them before they can come up.

Fighting Fear of the Blank Page: What if you could dismember your inner critic?

Dismember the page: Take a sheet of paper and tear it into six or seven uneven pieces. Shuffle them around. Throw some on the floor. Then write on each piece, one at a time. When finished, tape the pieces back into the shape of the original sheet, or not.

*Quick Note about links in this post: I am an amazon associate, so most of the links in my post will take you to amazon products. If you buy from these links, I will make some pennies which will help me pay for this site and my creative endeavors.

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Poetry Toolbox

These are quick exercises that I hope you’ll do every day. We will build on these exercises throughout the month.

  1. Word list: Write down the first ten words you think of when you think of fear. Any words at all. Anything that comes to mind. Then choose your three favorite and say them aloud a few times until you hear the accented and unaccented syllables (if more than one syllable) and notice the duration of each syllable. Add the least connected exact rhyme, and the strangest slant rhyme. (Inspired by Frances Mayes’ list of a hundred favorite words in The Discovery of Poetry)

I created this Excel Spreadsheet for you to use to collect and explore your fear words.

OctPoWriMo wordlistDownload

2. Sensory Imagery: In your journal or a word processing file, fill in these lines as quickly as you can. Notice they are slightly different from last week. You may want to revisit one or two in more detail if you’re inspired and have time.

I will see

I will hear

I will carry

I will smell

I will follow

The slice of

The pain of

I will taste

The color of

I will witness

I will touch

(Inspired by a week one exercise in the poetry chapter of The Portable MFA in Creative Writing)

3. More Sensory Imagery: Ask yourself sensory questions about fear of dismemberment.

4. Choose a poetry collection: Close-read three of your favorite poems from the collection.

Poetry Close Reading from Purdue OWL (Online Writing Lab)

Poetry Building

Prolepsis can be a great tool for poetry as each poem is a form of argument. Using prolepsis you can imagine all the objections to your idea, and the answers you come up with can add depth to your poem.

Example poem: Today we’re looking at Dismemberment by Sinan Antoon, copied here from poets.org for educational purposes.

Dismemberment

Sinan Antoon

The body, or a voice impersonating it, said:
Go! As of now, you are all free.
The eyes flew far away, joining flocks of other eyes.
which had filled the sky, almost blocking the sunlight.
The lips parted company without a farewell;
One searched for a new face,
the other for a lip that would listen to its complaints.
The tired tongue sought a mute man’s mouth to rest in.
The hands clapped and waved to each other as they fled
away.
The right leg appeared frightened and hesitant,
then rushed to catch up with the left leg.
The nose fell on the ground. . .
As for the heart, it kept beating alone
until a stray foot crushed it.

From Postcards from the Underworld (Seagull Books, 2023) by Sinan Antoon. Copyright © 2023 by Sinan Antoon.


How does this poem make you feel? What stands out to you? What is the purpose of this poem?

Today’s prompt: Write a poem exploring the fear of dismemberment using prolepsis.

Form: If you’re looking for more of a challenge, use prolepsis to write a Bop poem.

Write your poem and post it to your site (blog/ website/ other), then post a link in the chat. You may also post your poem in the chat if you do not have a place to post it. If you are posting as “someone” or “anonymous,” please put your name at the end of the poem. Throughout the day, please check back when you can to read and encourage other poets, to learn from each other, and enjoy each other’s efforts.

Writober Flash Fiction

Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end with conflict that leads to change in less than a thousand words (no minimal word count) inspired by one of the images in the Mutilation folder of the Writober 2024 Pinterest board. How does fear of dismemberment affect your character?

Novel Prep

Continuing to really get to know our characters, let’s look at how they move differently. When you really know a person, you know their walk, how they sit, how they stand, how they run. People move differently. Start exploring your MC’s physicality. Then compare it to your antagonist’s physicality. How are they different? How are they similar?

Halloween Photography Challenge

Take a photograph that depicts fear of dismemberment, and link to your photo in the chat.

Get Moving

Now that you’ve read all the prompts and have all these ideas running around in your head, it’s time for motion. Some suggestions:

Cardio drumming. Here’s something different. Turn your exercise ball into a drum. To hold the ball I use an old plastic garbage bin.

Now, grab what inspires you, and create!

Don’t forget to come back & link in the comments.

See you soon!

Fending Off Attacks

Fear of Attack by Maria L. Berg 2024

These are my responses to the Writober prompt post Fear of Attack.

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Attack Attention

Beware the crows
circling the cornfield
and the children
behind the rows
where are their parents?

Pay attention when rotting
wood gives way, traps
your ankle, and you hear
giant scissors somewhere
Why do you smell bacon?

Stay alert when the sky’s
neon-green and flying
machines are hovering
over everything and everyone
Where’s the music for this
laser-show coming from?

Hyper-vigilance is the key
to staying safe from murderous
sprees, but you’ll also need
to be prepared. Don’t let
monsters catch you unaware.

Writober Flash Fiction

Candace’s downstairs neighbor watched Texas Chainsaw Massacre every day. The horrible screams and chainsaw noises that came up through the floorboards made her worry about his psyche, and discouraged her from ever watching the film.

Tonight, lost on a dirt road after her car broke down, staring at a man’s silhouette holding a revving chainsaw over his head, she wished she was more like her downstairs neighbor. At least she would have an idea of what happens next.

Halloween Photography Challenge

For today’s images I thought of an axe-wielding maniac, so I cut an axe-shape filter and took photos in the mirrorworld with the red-only effect.

Happy Writober!

Getting in the Halloween Spirit?

See you tomorrow!

Fear of Attack

Welcome back for the twenty-third day of Writober. During this fourth week we’re exploring the universal fear of mutilation. Today we’re looking at fear of attack.

Fear of Attack by Maria L. Berg 2021

Fear of attack is a fear of violence, terrorism, and also a fear of not being able to know the hearts and minds of others. It is a fear of evil intent, of sociopaths and psychopaths (fear of insanity). It’s a fear of weapons, injury and death.

I found a helpful tip from a Cigma healthcare article “Coping with Anxiety and Fear of Violent Attacks and Terrorism”

Be aware, but not fearful. Awareness—paying attention to your surroundings, and noticing anything unusual about people and their behavior—is helpful. Being constantly fearful is not helpful. It can actually limit awareness. Fear is a focus on what could happen, which can leave you less aware of what is happening. A sudden feeling of fear is an important clue that something may be wrong. If you are always fearful, that sudden feeling can’t emerge as a clue.”

Rhetorical Device: feminine and masculine rhyme

Masculine rhyme only rhymes the final syllable of a word. I liked this explanation from novlr’s What is a Feminine Rhyme?:

“While masculine rhyme, where the final syllable is stressed, is a staple of poetry, feminine rhyme is often overlooked but equally powerful, adding musicality and nuance to a poem. Feminine rhyme rhymes two or more multi-syllable words on the penultimate (second-to-last) syllable, with the final syllable unstressed, thus creating a more delicate and varied effect.”

“An example of a feminine rhyme is the pairing of the words ‘turtle’ and ‘fertile.’ The word ‘turtle’ has two syllables, with the stress on the first syllable, and the word ‘fertile’ has two syllables, with the stress on the first. With the stress falling on the penultimate syllable of ‘fertile,’ the two words create a gentle and pleasing rhyme, which can be used to create a more subtle and complex effect in a poem.” (I altered this quote to make sense)

There are also masculine and feminine line endings. The masculine line ends on a stressed syllable, and the feminine line ends on an unstressed syllable. For a quick review of syllabic stress and meter take a look at Sounds of Words: Stress and Duration.

Fighting Fear of the Blank Page: A lot of the time this fear comes from not knowing where to start. What if the order of things didn’t matter?

Writing cube: I came up with this idea on the second day of April’s NaPoWriMo this year. Terrance Hayes’s thoughts on boxes made me think of using flattened cube to put my words on. Then I can put the words on the inside or the outside of the cube, and then by turning the cube, enter the poem (or any writing) from different text.

*Quick Note about links in this post: I am an amazon associate, so most of the links in my post will take you to amazon products. If you buy from these links, I will make some pennies which will help me pay for this site and my creative endeavors.

OctPoWriMo

Poetry Toolbox

These are quick exercises that I hope you’ll do every day. We will build on these exercises throughout the month.

  1. Word list: Write down the first ten words you think of when you think of fear. Any words at all. Anything that comes to mind. Then choose your three favorite and say them aloud a few times until you hear the accented and unaccented syllables (if more than one syllable) and notice the duration of each syllable. Add the least connected exact rhyme, and the strangest slant rhyme. Can you think of a feminine rhyme? (Inspired by Frances Mayes’ list of a hundred favorite words in The Discovery of Poetry)

I created this Excel Spreadsheet for you to use to collect and explore your fear words.

OctPoWriMo wordlistDownload

2. Sensory Imagery: In your journal or a word processing file, fill in these lines as quickly as you can. Notice they are slightly different from last week. You may want to revisit one or two in more detail if you’re inspired and have time.

I will see

I will hear

I will carry

I will smell

I will follow

The slice of

The pain of

I will taste

The color of

I will witness

I will touch

(Inspired by a week one exercise in the poetry chapter of The Portable MFA in Creative Writing)

3. More Sensory Imagery: Ask yourself sensory questions about fear of attack.

4. Choose a poetry collection: Keep reading the collection this time more slowly. Read each poem aloud. Take your time. What stands out to you? What do you like? What don’t you like?

Poetry Building

Feminine and masculine rhyme – take a look through your wordlist. Can you identify any feminine rhymes? How do they sound different than masculine rhymes.

Example poem: Today we’re looking at The Shark by William Henry Venable, copied here from poets.org for educational purposes.

The Shark

William Henry Venable

Captured! Along the beach those shouts reveal The fisherman exultant victor! Hark! The Karcharos, from out his crystalline, dark Blue lair by rud of flesh and lurking steel Bewrayed, hath ravined down with his last meal Death as a gobbet. On the hot sand, stark, He gasps and shudders agonizing. Mark! With horrible grin those bloody jaws appeal Unto his gloating murderers.—No more Those serried ranks sextuple of fanged white Shall scare the shallows and appall the shore, Never again wreak havoc and affright, Ranging the Gulf Stream, weltering in gore;— Poor Shark! Man-eater! learn of Man, to fight.


How does this poem make you feel? What stands out to you? Who is the attacker in this poem?

Today’s prompt: Write a poem exploring the fear of attack using feminine and masculine rhyme anywhere in your poem.

Form: If you’re looking for more of a challenge, write a monorhyme poem with alternating masculine and feminine end rhymes.

Write your poem and post it to your site (blog/ website/ other), then post a link in the chat. You may also post your poem in the chat if you do not have a place to post it. If you are posting as “someone” or “anonymous,” please put your name at the end of the poem. Throughout the day, please check back when you can to read and encourage other poets, to learn from each other, and enjoy each other’s efforts.

Writober Flash Fiction

Write a story with a beginning, middle, and end with conflict that leads to change in less than a thousand words (no minimal word count) inspired by one of the images in the Mutilation folder of the Writober 2024 Pinterest board. How does fear of injury affect your character?

Novel Prep

I had a feeling that something was wrong with NaNoWriMo this year. There weren’t any write-ins scheduled online or locally. It looks like the NaNoWriMo organization stepped in it again. Last year there was a controversy over their response to bad actors in the forums, and now there’s a controversy to their statements on AI. So my local municipal liaison has quit and many writers don’t want to be associated with the organization anymore. So yet another of the online events I found motivational is being abandoned. It may be time for me to take a hint and let it go.

That doesn’t mean we can’t write a novel draft in November. But now I’m wondering if I shouldn’t continue my poetry focus and start my new novel in January instead. I have some thinking to do.

Halloween Photography Challenge

Take a photograph that depicts fear of attack, and link to your photo in the chat.

Get Moving

Now that you’ve read all the prompts and have all these ideas running around in your head, it’s time for motion. Some suggestions:

Self-defense: practicing self-defense actions can be good exercise. I have Self-defense Training Camp for Xbox 360, and it gets me moving. Or you may want to try this basic self-defense course I found on Youtube:

Now, grab what inspires you, and create!

Don’t forget to come back & link in the comments.

See you soon!